Friday 5 February 2010

Finalised Ideas

0 - 10 secs -Establishing/ long shot/ over the shoulder shot/ Tracking shot of detective drawing closer to the door/ mid shot of detective opening door - Tape recorder begins to play right from the start, we can hear the murderers smooth calm voice and the screaming of the victim. This gives illusion the Detective is about to walk in on the murder. Towards the 10 secs mark the screaming increases in sound. - Eloise's house, corridor leading to upstairs main bathroom. - Props: Tripod on skateboard to use tracking shot and make it smooth, and recorder off set.

10 - 20 secs - Long shot/ zoom on mid shot/ long shot/ flash shot on credits - The recorder after the door is opened starts playing the murderer's riddle it continues throughout. - zoom on dead body in bathroom covered in blood and the bath is also filled with blood - First credit appears with flash shot of one of our names and roles in the production on a black background. The music here continues with the tape recorder but non diegetic sound distantly plays. - Props: fake blood, MDF board for the background, tape recorder.

20 - 30 secs - High angle mid/long shot /flash shot/ high angle mid/close up shot - Dead body, second credit of another persons name and role, dead body for final shot in 30 seconds. - Props: fake blood, MDF board for the background, tape recorder.

30 - 40 secs - Flash shot/ long shot/ mid shot - The Last credit of the last persons name and role then flash into a long shot of the Detective in a dark room looking through evidence in the book and the title 'Legend of the Spinx' is shown on his left hand side of the desk. Mid shot of the detective looking through the book. - Props: Garage, the book and tape recorder on his desk, Desk and chair and books (desk items).

40 - 50 secs - Panning shot 360 degrees around the detective/ a further 180 degrees panning shot /zoom - After the 180 degrees panning shot we mid shot/slight zoom onto the detective's book when he is slowly looking through it then close up on the book so the audience can read the text. Props: recorder/ Desk and chair/ Desk props/The book with text and pictures.- music - when we do a panning shot round the detective he rewinds the recorder to create a fast sense with the music and action. The music increases when looking through the book.

50 - 1 minute secs - Flash shot of photo/ zoom shot of book/ flash shot of second photo/ mid shot- Flash of 1st picture and the zooms onto book, further close up on riddle in the book and then zoom out on book. The detective reads the ridde aloud. Sudden flash to the second picture which is girl after death. Mid shot of detective answering the riddle in the book. - music - Tape recorder very faint whilst detectives talking and non diegetic music increases. - Props: The book, tape recorder, photos, desk and chair and desk objects.

3 comments:

  1. Feedback from P3-72

    We think that it is written and set out well, it looks very professional. The story is very dramatic and described well with the props and camera angles.

    A problem may be that you have only planned one minute of footage. Also, the camera may get damaged if it is used with a skateboard so take precautions.

    As a psychological thriller, the danger is on a mental level at first and we can tell this because of the riddles which leave the antagonist anonymous.

    to improve the opening you could plan longer.

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  2. This is well planned out, with lots of detail including sound and props. It meets the conventions of a psychological thriller however we think there might be a bit too much blood, verging on a horror. We think your ideas for the credits are good and are slotted in appropriate places. We feel there may be too many shots per 10 seconds, so therefore you could extend the time taken on each shot to increase the length of the opening but without losing the desired effect.

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  3. It is well planned out and well detailed. Also, we think that it is written and set out well. The variety of shots in this is well thought out although how will you carry out these shots without making it look like a hand-held shot? It is good that you have thought about what type of shots you are going to use, and i also think this will make your filming easier as you have set out how you are going to film each clip. You might want to consider the amount of gore shown in your clip.
    Peace out P3-69
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